Friday, August 31, 2007

lament

After bed,
Christine drinks.

Eggs feed girlish hunger.

I just knew later
(my nap over prematurely)
Questions rose.

Singular.

Tense.


Under veils,
Wails.


Xanthous yellow zombies.



This is the weirdest poem ever. Why? Because every word starts with consecutive letters of the alphabet. Neato, huh? Slouching Mom suggested trying this fun twist on poetry. Try it!

21 comments:

slouching mom said...

Cool! Thanks for playing. I'll link you up.

"xanthous" rocks, btw.

Kyla said...

Brave lady. I'm loving these, though not brave enough to make my own attempt.

NotSoSage said...

...or just don't have enough energy...in my case.

Xanthous does rock.

flutter said...

That was awesome!

painted maypole said...

Xanthous

most Xcellent

MizMell said...

Awesome, indeed! And it makes perfect sense to me.

blooming desertpea said...

this is brilliant!

Manic Mommy said...

Oh, the lament of sleeplessness. I love Christine Drinks...

Have to google Zanthous now.

(another) Christine (aka Manic Mommy)

Kevin said...

Awesome. I didn't notice the letter until you mentioned it.

jen said...

i keep seeing this and keep thinking i bow to all of your brilliances.

Emily said...

Xanathous Yellow Zombies...That sounds like me when the baby decides not to sleep!

Incidentally, I wrote my poem about The Jena Six, who I found about from reading your blog that sent me to Kevin's blog...

I can't get them off of my mind. Thanks for raising awareness.

Mike M said...

This is very cool! I like the concept. I will give it a try!

Ma said...

Ooo! I like this one. I can remember those nights and nights of too little sleep.

thirtysomething said...

Funny! I am enjoying reading these, but haven't yet tried it myself. Too chicken!

Magpie said...

Terrific!

thailandchani said...

Wow... now that's an unusual idea. :)



Peace,

~Chani
http://thailandgal.blogspot.com

Joy, of course said...

Wow. This is great! And you didn't have to cheat on X like me. I didn't even know what "xanthous" was, I had to look it up. You smart cookie you.

Aliki2006 said...

I love this!

Great job--I might try my hand at this when we get back.

Jenn said...

Hailing your brilliance.

And loving that you drink after bed.

:)

Hel said...

I a strange way, it does make sense.

niobe said...

Yessss! And, like many of your other commenters, xanthous is my new favorite word.